Rough cut critique writer, written right after private viewing (west hollywood)

A long time writer (optioned a book to a major studio awhile back).
I am author of 18 books.
Producers, I can watch your just finished rough cut of your TV series pilot or feature and write a point-by-point 1000 word commentary; a review of sorts but intent on pointing out flaws in continuity , emphasis or facts.
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For instance, I just reviewed Ferrari by Michael Mann and pointed out in my reviews (not run yet) that they didn't educate the audience enough on the big race that the film is about and they are a few years off in the chronology of real events as to when Ford was pitched a chance to buy Ferrari.
I can send you the review on request because I don't know when the two websites I sent it to are going to run it.
I can view what you've just done on film and write the commentary right after viewing, I can do it on your computer or bring my own laptop and send it over on email to you (or print it out if you have printer).
Payment $300/3 hr.
session incl.
viewing and writing the 1,000 word critique, payable when I hand it in or email it.
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